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When feelings are flying away
Contributed by
DanishPoet
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Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 05:24:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My feelings for you, is the only thing i trust
I feel so happy to be by your side, even outside in the frost.
The moment you walk away and shut behind your door,
or should I say: the moment I see you no more,
Then my heart crumbles and starts to bleed,
and just won't stop, until next time we meet.
And when I'm with you, i'm feeling so afraid.
that i might do something wrong.
And the apology will be too late.
even before the first line of my song.
I've always noticed the smile you bringing
My song will only revolve around you,
but then again; concerning singing,
will I know the time to do?
Your laughter is haunting my sleep.
And the only thing I see in the dark,
I hope one day to wake up from my deep,
and knowing that I'm within your hearth.
The day might be nearing,
but i cannot tell.
Could someone help me,
Is this the last hour of this hell?
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DanishPoet
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2005-03-09 17:24:20]
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Re: When feelings are flying away
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 06:38:08 PM AEST
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Interesting write.... makes one think.....
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Re: When feelings are flying away
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by ToriVeigh on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 08:27:13 PM AEST
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| I feel you! It is so hard to be close to someone that you love, when you're not allowed to love them. Hang in there. I hope it works out for you and me too! |
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