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THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:30:30 PM in AEST
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I TOOK AN OATH A LONG TIME AGO
SO DONT ASK ME WHY I RETURNED TO THE STREETS
CAUSE ITS NOT OF YOUR KNOWLEDGE TO KNOW
BLACK AND GOLD ARE THE COLORS OF MY FLAG
THAT I ONCE AGAIN WEAR OVER MY SHOULDER
CLEANING MY GLOCK
I SAW MY REFLECTION
AND I COULDNT RESIST
I NEEDED TO HOLD HER
I DONT DESERVE YOUR LOVE GOD
SO ITS OKAY TO PUT ME ASIDE
YOU CREATED A TRUE WARRIOR
SO
BY ALL MEANS
LET ME RIDE
I WONT BRING HAVOC UPON NO OTHERS
I'M JUST GONNA GET CLOSURE
FOR THE DEATHS OF MY BROTHERS
I'LL BE LOYAL TO THOSE WHO SERVE ME WELL
AND IF ANYONE SHOULD CROSS MY PATH
THEY WILL FEEL THE DEPTHS OF MY HELL
I DONT NEED NO ALLIES
ALL I NEED IN THIS WAR IS ME
I'M GOING BACK ON MY MISSION
FOR VEGEANCE
TO SET THE SINFUL SOULS
FREE
Copyright ©
THUGGIN4REAL
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2005-03-09 15:30:30]
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:36:32 PM AEST
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Well i must say i am impress with this one.
You wrote from the soul.
well done. |
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by Kay-Kay on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:39:34 PM AEST
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great poem keep it up
~Kay-Kay
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by Red_October on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 04:00:05 PM AEST
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| You have so much inside ready to explode, it's good that you are writing it out. "ALL I NEED IN THIS WAR IS ME". Very powerful. Tiffany J. |
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 04:10:39 PM AEST
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Thanks for your suggestion that I check out your street poems. You have a lot of angst and express that inner pressure well here.
-ma |
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by smilez101 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 04:44:24 PM AEST
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| i really don't know what to say it was a great poem that had a lot of feeling in it thanx 4 sharing that |
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 08:25:25 PM AEST
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| Another really great write. I really like your style. Painful, raw, but beautiful. Peace to you. |
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 11:07:21 PM AEST
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| Thanks for recomending this write, it really seemed to come from the depths of your soul.2 thumbs up! |
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by jillian_phan on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 02:51:57 PM AEST
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| that was deep, try to flow it a little more, because it has good meaning, but it could be just be, i like things that flow and have rhythm... but don't take my comment to the heart, take what i say, accept the comment good or bad, good for reassurance and bad for improvement.... |
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by Compton-tre-block on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:46:30 PM AEST
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thats another day in the mind brutha..
Im feelin it my nig..
U clean the glocks?
I carry the throw-away,kill, an throw it in the
docks.. straight 2pac mentality |
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Re: THE RETURN OF THE GANGSTER
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by bigtig6269 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:57:27 PM AEST
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| Not too bad man. Sounds like something that should be on BET. I used to live in New Orleans, I know what some of it's like, but now I'm a country boy lol. pretty good rythmn. Keep it up |
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