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FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE?
Contributed by
bravepen
on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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We've became so close in a very short while
I thought you're the friend so good and true
But everything changed i don't know why
You disappointed me,i was fooled by you
Misunderstanding,it happens,it's no war
some from me,lots from you,enough!shut this door
Let's forget and bring back what we had before
Didn't work,i wonder what you wanted more
Did i ever hurt you somehow?
why do you have to do this now?
I can't believe you chose this unexpected end
How could you?!it's the last thind i expect
Easy you forget and easy you replace
I became nothing but an old trace
Take off the picture of us you had on your wall
Erase my number you will not call
give me the secrets i kept with you
For i'll never share it with someone new
But when i think that you were not worth it
I cheer up and stop feeling bad that we split
A good lesson in life i learned and won
False appearence,trust no one!
I 'm not blaming you coz you don't like to be blamed
But if i were you,i'd be very very ashamed
I wonder if i'll ever find a FRIEND that would
Be all what the word Friendship include
Copyright ©
bravepen
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2002-12-16 20:00:00]
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Re: FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE?
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:10:55 PM AEST
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I like this. It's really good, and it shows what happens in friendships. But trust me, I thought like that and I found a true friend, her names Damara. She's the one that brought me to this site, you might know her as MoonlitAngel.
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Re: FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE?
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 10:36:48 PM AEST
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| True friends are hard to come by you just have to stick with it! Great write! Christina |
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Re: FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE?
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by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 10:45:45 PM AEST
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Aww this is sad...i been here in this place before it hurts very deeply....this brought back memories for me of long ago....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed reading it..
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Re: FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 11:41:50 PM AEST
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Nicely done..welcome to ypdc...
Jenni |
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