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The Color Gray
Contributed by
ramfire
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Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:20:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Mice rats winter day clouds coats shawls
Gray pants tunics bugles play calls
Horses neigh for action hate stalls
Ride hard brave scout
Paint on iron battleship hulls
Make rust stay out
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ramfire
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2005-03-09 14:20:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Color Gray
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 04:05:47 PM AEST (User
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well, I have an affinity for the color, and was drawn by the title. Think you could present a bit more descriptive imagery to make the color really pop for even those you don't share my appreciation. |
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