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Serenity In Murder
Contributed by
Opium
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Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
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She woke up from what she thought was a terrifying dream
Just to see her lips stitched and she can't scream
Tears from her eyes mixed with make up gone dry
Tied on an iron bed, awaken from her own cry
Her naked body shivered in the blistering cold
As she watched with terror her death unfold
Next to her I stood with a knife in my hand
And I slowly worked it over her skin strand
She bled a river, leaving a red satin sheet on the floor
My anger, my hunger control me once forevermore
So next to her I slept
Around her skinless body, my hands I kept
In the morning I woke with her dead body lying next to mine
An erotic sensation tingled down my spine
Smooth blue, black lips
I start salivating as we kiss
Mine forever this sweet death
I cannot forget your soft breath
Shades are drawn no one else can see
What I've done, what's become of me
Evidence lead to one conclusion
A rotten body with much confusion
Here I stand above all that's been true
How I love …how I love to kill you.
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Opium
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Re: Serenity In Murder
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:52:46 PM AEST
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Please tell me this is just a metaphor...
Other than that, this is soooooo beautiful!! I can't believe it! It flows so nicely! Good write :-)
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Re: Serenity In Murder
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by dantoad on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:44:20 PM AEST
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| i really really loved this...lol, its cool as long as it holds no truth, lol. |
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Re: Serenity In Murder
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by juliette on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 10:26:12 PM AEST
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I just wanted to tell you that your poem reminds me of a song - "Last Dance with Mary Jane" by Tom Petty - Is that what the song's called? Giggle,giggle Anyhow, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Serenity In Murder
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by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 10:34:01 PM AEST
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Oh how i wish i could kill you to save the very sight of you i love you so i would take completely....that's what this reminds me of....this is so beautiful....and as this person has murdered ....the vision of it is for true love as tho the person cherishes her and keeps her for his own...until his own life he takes....lol im gettin all weird and analystic now sheesh....i dont condone murder in anyway , this is just what i see...it's a beautiful poem the way you threw love in their with it....coz when murder takes place i dont think love is involved....i don't know this is one i 'd have to think about....i might start a forum topic on this so come get involved in it lol....thanks for sharing this one...
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Re: Serenity In Murder
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by gina on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 06:47:51 AM AEST
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gr8 movie, wish i can get to see it :P
mmm the salivating part was very me2ref :S
i imagined it , yuk!!!
im begining to fear u , mmm if u don't find me online , don't wonder why :S :P
but i didnt understand why u killed her?ma 7aram ya wa7ech!
hehe this was a great write , but where's the Explicit lyrics lol
c ya on msn |
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Re: Serenity In Murder
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 01:59:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful....
joelle |
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