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Night On The Beach
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Once upon a moonlit night
we walked a lonely beach.
Stars twinklled high above
they seemed close enough to reach.
Arm in arm the mood was set,
gulls rested here and there.
We chatted for a little while
our talk light as air.
This moment would be priceless,
it would last throughout the years.
A quick exchange of, "I love you's"
washed away our hidden fears.
Water rippled in the moonlight,
soft sand beneath our feet.
What a time to hear, and so sincere,
an, " I love you," so sweet.
Two lovers in the night
hand in hand we stroll the beach.
Gazing up to see the stars
almost close enough to reach.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-12-16 19:20:00]
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Re: Night On The Beach
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by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:40:07 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem, one i know that if i had i definately wouldn't forget...thanks for sharing this one, and by tha way there's a forum started on Dreamz if you wanna get involved there ....hehe....
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Re: Night On The Beach
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 12:01:57 AM AEST
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This is beautiful ShadowsCloud.... very nice imagery!!
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Re: Night On The Beach
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 08:51:25 AM AEST
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You do have some lovely dreams Candice,
and you get them down in words so well!
Excellent writing as usual from you here!
I did write you a quick message this morn; just to wish you a Happy Christmas, but it's still sat in my outbox!
So do have a wonderful Christmas Candice and family, I wish for you the best of everything I can and can't think of.
All my love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Night On The Beach
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 11:35:38 PM AEST
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Dean, I am glad that you liked this one. I really enjoyed writing this one because it was one of those the jus flowed naturally. I did not have to think about it at all.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Night On The Beach
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 11:56:50 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem great visuals |
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