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Love Aching to be Freed
Contributed by
Curtisc
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Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 12:39:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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We're getting closer with each passing day,
well at least I think so.
When we're together it's like you were never away,
we still love each other, this I know.
Each day I hope to see your face,
or at least hear your voice.
If I don't I feel this huge empty space,
I'd see you everyday if it were my choice.
Just being close to you again warms my heart,
it knows when it's true love is near.
I hate it when you leave, I don't want to be apart,
I wish you could always be here.
The one wish that I hope comes true,
is all that I'll ever need.
That wish is to again be with you,
so all this love in my heart can finally be freed.
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Curtisc
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2005-03-09 00:39:59]
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Re: Love Aching to be Freed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:09:39 AM AEST
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So very beautifull.
A maserpeice of beauty.
Hope all goes your way. Keep the faith.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Love Aching to be Freed
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by O7NeVeS on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:43:50 AM AEST
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| It's crazy how u can write so many poems bout the same subject...beautifully written... i think we all know that this love will be reunited. But, nonetheless, good luck...Tanya |
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Re: Love Aching to be Freed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:56:33 AM AEST
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| This is such a great and romantic piece you have here. Excellent work as always. |
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Re: Love Aching to be Freed
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by bitterkell on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:58:10 AM AEST
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Good Write!
The right will come back when they know there is someone who loves them and is waiting for them
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Re: Love Aching to be Freed
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 12:27:13 PM AEST
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beautiful as usual and I agree this ember still burns its red hot!
Michelle |
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Re: Love Aching to be Freed
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:59:26 PM AEST
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| AWW SO SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL. |
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