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listening means
Contributed by
electrique_poet
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Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 12:33:53 AM in AEST
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listening means that i am lead;
most curiously said
words written in different languages
as an avatar
hanging from a flagpole;
screwed to a tree
a caveat of death beyond wonder;
my bed has a soft blue blanket
placid water hands tuck me in
irradient eyes watch)
neoteric tragedies of comedic value;
and i watch as in i hope;
and i never let go of the rope
for a chuckle
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Re: listening means
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by zenmind on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 06:02:53 PM AEST
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wow, This is the second poem I've read of yours, and I must say that you have a very unique voice. And please take that as a huge complement :) because most poets on this sight are not unique. Your style stands out. You use great images, and your poems are a pleasure to read.
I really liked the first stanza. The words were great, plus the sound of the words together struck me too. I don't know if that makes sense, but it was really poetic. Great poem.
Be True,
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Re: listening means
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by creed on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:24:33 PM AEST
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| This really is an amazing poem. I love it. |
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