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Looking through Eye lids

Contributed by n0body on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 09:30:28 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Don't they like to look over here?
Cause it did seem convincing, evident and clear.

Their eyes never blinked, as they walked by.
As though they didn't realize, it might be a lie.

Like they never cared, to think or to doubt.
If they'd be ok, with out without.

But I know they all love each other.

I know,
They're a friend.
But I never realized,
its all just pretend.

But I thought that they loved me for who they saw.
I thought that their eyes could see pure with no flaw.

But today I stopped and decided to think.
And I finally found that missing link.

I opened my eyes, and ACTAULLY could see.
And I saw that no one was looking at me.

Everyone was walking with their eyes closed,
And I wished that I sooner, thought to appose.

But today I've learned to REALLY look and see,
and I know they're lieing when they says they're looking at me.

Our eyes are open, they may say....
Its a stall.
Cuase they're really closed.
They can't see at all.

And now, when I see them look and stare.
I know they're all looking at someone,
Who really isn't there.

Copyright © n0body ... [ 2005-03-08 21:30:28]
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Re: Looking through Eye lids (User Rating: 1 )
by SilentPwn on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 02:55:48 PM AEST
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Nice poem.

"But I thought that they loved me for who they saw.
I thought that their eyes could see pure with no flaw."

^That has to be my favorite part.
Good job and Keep writing.

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