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Toilet Paper Rose
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:04:08 PM in AEST
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A soft-to-the-touch, white spiral inward
A shape most people don’t take time to notice
A fragrance not nearly as pleasant as it’s propaganda—however grand or poor that hype may be
A reaction so cliche, so overdone and consequently repugnant
A thought so sickening, disgusting, vile
A....
A...
A....
Just...
UGH!!!
How appropriate
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liquidsunshine
... [
2005-03-08 20:04:08]
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Re: Toilet Paper Rose
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:14:54 PM AEST
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I could so write my own song called Toilit Paper Rose. But I won't.
Anyway, This was pretty good. |
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Re: Toilet Paper Rose
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by GeminiDreamer on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 11:14:43 PM AEST
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| I like the subtle irony |
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Re: Toilet Paper Rose
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 12:48:19 AM AEST
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| GOOD WRITE |
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Re: Toilet Paper Rose
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:53:00 AM AEST
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Indeed how appropriate it is.
Very nicely writen Chels i really enjoyed this write.
Jane ^_^ |
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