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The agony of 'But.'
Contributed by
Kay-P-M-Devenish
on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Agony slithering its coil as serpents do
tighter to a knot inside my gut,
constricting dead
the pulse of love once true,
to hiss betrayal’s line,
‘I love you….
……………..But’…
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2002-12-16 17:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The agony of 'But.'
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:09:08 PM AEST (User
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absoulutly correct and beautiful |
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Re: The agony of 'But.'
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:24:03 PM AEST (User
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Very thought provoking, Kay...Hope all is well with you...
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: The agony of 'But.'
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:09:55 PM AEST (User
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Oh this holds so much truth in it....geez....i enjoyed reading this one kay thanks for sharing it....Keep em' coming girl..
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Re: The agony of 'But.'
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:12:11 PM AEST (User
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This is SO cool Kay! Very original.... Keep them coming! :) |
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Re: The agony of 'But.'
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:57:04 AM AEST (User
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ahh kay, arg, i just went through this, argggg, excellent and so true, conditional love just is not truelove, hugs, woofies and lotsa warm love, nessa
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