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Breathe
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:21:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Take the dive with me
Into the pool that reeks so beautifully of love
Come jump with me
Off the mountains that echo’s so vividly -
Life.
Come soar with me through the cobwebs in the sky
And breathe.
Breathe and you’ll know.
Everything’s gonna be alright
Feel the goose bumps prickle your skin
As you learn to laugh at yourself
As you learn to accept yourself
Love yourself
And value life like never before.
Come grow with me.
Venture through these years that only happen once.
Come explore with me.
The world with all its beauty and faults.
And if ever you should fail
If ever you should fall,
Breathe. Just breathe.
Breathe and you’ll know,
Everything’s gonna be alright.
Because that’s Life
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
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2005-03-08 16:21:53]
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Re: Breathe
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 05:02:43 PM AEST
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| inspirational/beautiful. TiffanyJ. |
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Re: Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 05:45:25 PM AEST
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| wow....this piece is absolutely beautiful. it leaves tinglies inside ^_^ |
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Re: Breathe
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 06:07:32 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful and strong write.
the imagery you cast on your reader is fantastic. An enjoyable and pleasant poem to read. Thanks for sharing it |
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Re: Breathe
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:37:47 AM AEST
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Amazingly beautiful. What more can I say?? Awesome!
*~Erin~* |
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