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Damaged Heart.....
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:05:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears on my pillow
Pain in my heart
I made a mistake
Right from the start
This battered heart like
this shall remain
Until I find the strength
To start all over again
We, I believed had a
beautiful love
Years of memories
Blessed from up above
But sadly I was unaware
of your other love
When I found out
I fell like a wounded dove
You were a heart breaker and
I was your aim
You wounded me
My life will never be the same
This broken, fragile heart in
pieces remains
Unrepairable, shattered and in
excruciating pain.
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-03-08 16:05:42]
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Re: Damaged Heart.....
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:23:14 PM AEST
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| I can't even tell you how this touches me. Tiffany J. |
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Re: Damaged Heart.....
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:27:31 PM AEST
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emotional indeed. i think you did a good job portraying that
well written. |
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Re: Damaged Heart.....
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:43:35 PM AEST
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Wow!! Emotionally charged...great write.
Jenni |
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Re: Damaged Heart.....
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by Beniam on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:01:12 PM AEST
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You know, if I wasn't a guy, I would hate guys. But I'd like me cause I'm a good guy, but a guy none the less... You know what I mean... neways, I hope that day comes soon for you!!!
w/ phi'lia love.
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Re: Damaged Heart.....
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by GeminiDreamer on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 07:28:12 PM AEST
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| A perfect representation of what a cheating parnter can do to one's heart. I love it, evert excruciating moment, written perfectly. |
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Re: Damaged Heart.....
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 12:52:21 AM AEST
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| I MUST SAY THIS IS A GREAT POEM I TOO HAVE BEEN THE VICTOM OF A LYING CHEATING FOOL....BUT IN THE END IT COMES BACK TO THEM... |
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Re: Damaged Heart.....
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 12:28:56 PM AEST
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| very emotional great job |
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Re: Damaged Heart.....
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 04:00:27 PM AEST
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Honest and sad write. You expressed yourself with full emotion, and the impact was good.
thanks for sharing this. |
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