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Crying your tears
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:05:23 PM in AEST
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For the last few years
When i wake
I see crimson on my pillow
I just kept it to my self
Went from day to day
trying to forget
Forget the pain you caused
I can't help but blame my self
Everynight i dream
Dream of how much pain you had
And wondering what caused it
Suddenly i realize the crimson is from me
Crying you tears
You tears of blood and pain
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Re: Crying your tears
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:16:33 PM AEST
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this is a great poem, it is short but it is good, i can tell you are in a lot of pain and i hope you will be ok.. it really sucks losing people who are close to you...keep the poems coming.
~Kay-Kay
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Re: Crying your tears
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by BabyGurl_Monkey on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:42:49 PM AEST
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This is a good poem i can relate to u a lot i too lost sumone i luved very much maybe not to suecide but to heroin addiction he died way before he should of. im so sry for ur lose n' i hope ur doin betta. just remember its neva ur fault for what othas do its there choice there life there will no matta what u cant blame urself for what another did it'll rip u apart inside if u do n' u'll neva heal from the pain believe me i went through years of blamin myself for my friends death
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Re: Crying your tears
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:46:38 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem, in content, it just seems a bit under developed like you didn't want to think about the pain at that time so you stopped writing. it left me kind of wondering more about what happened. Tiffany J. |
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Re: Crying your tears
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 06:32:54 PM AEST
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| Man! its been like ten years since we have talked...I miss it...I gotta get MSN back on well I will when my comp gets faster lol. well I hope all is well and you are doing good!...ttyl great write by the way...dont you just hate that feeling of loss...when the loss could have been prevented...well I love you buh bye |
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Re: Crying your tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:48:22 AM AEST
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Well.. *pauses for words*
Heart-wrenching poem, I'd say.
The pain you feel is well-expressed, and clear to my eye.
I'm sorry you had to go through this (and the others who were attached to the happening, too), but if you ever need to talk, you know where I be. :)
Hope,
~Kt |
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