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~*F!r3*~
Contributed by
Formerly_known
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Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 02:40:59 PM in AEST
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Theres a fire inside of me
Living deep down
Breathing with every breath i take
every step i take
everywhere i go
its slowly burning hotter and grows
Its burning
urging...needing
wanting to spread
But i keep it under control
it feeds off my thoughts
Wanting to take the open road
like a drop top 69 camaro
All Throttle this fire
has no need for a
Nitro bottle
But it will soon burn out
Dont let your fire burn out
Dont feel like your no good
DONT ever doubt Your Self-Worth
Feed that Fire Let it loose
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2005-03-08 14:40:59]
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Re: ~*F!r3*~
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:38:52 PM AEST
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| i think there is a fantastic message here. great write. |
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Re: ~*F!r3*~
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:57:19 PM AEST
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Nice poem... and nice way of spelling f!r3. I was a little confused at the beginning and I wasn't sure if the fire was a bad thing or good thing. Why do you want to keep it under control, but then in the end you let it loose. Is there a way you can try explaining why you keep it under control and don't let it loose? It is really good though with everything else... and it is a truth of life...
Jodi |
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