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Sublime
Contributed by
putteragain
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Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 01:22:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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rolling hills of vibrant blue
come to clear my soul
wrap your heart around my love
and together become whole
valley trembles with our passion
birds sing silent for just a time
love we make to red hot embers
together we reach sublime
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2005-03-08 13:22:33]
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Re: Sublime
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 01:24:59 PM AEST
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Very good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Sublime
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by electrique_poet on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 01:54:28 PM AEST
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this is very nice, you paint a picture of a passionate moment very well and for a moment after reading this the feeling seemed to hang there, and it slowly faded as the world started to slowly spin again, i enjoyed this short read
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