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The call
Contributed by
candiegurl202005
on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 11:17:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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When i called you up last night
It just didn't seem right
You were on the phone
But in a different zone
Instead of talking to me
You kept yapping on the scene
I wanted your full attention
Nevertheless, I guess i needed your permission
If it's me you really want
How come you making it out as a joke
You lost me once
You wanna do it agian?
If not i guess you be a better man
You just should have said,
"Baby i'll call you tomorrow"
Then i wouldn't have had so much pain and sorrow
Little did you know I cried myself to sleep?
Asking myself, why he acted like a creep
Next time I call you answer the phone
In addition, this time don't be in a different time zone
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2005-03-08 11:17:31]
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Re: The call
(User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 07:02:00 PM AEST
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| you go girl !! i like this poem .. at first when i read the call i thought of the song by backstreet boys the call .. lol arent i a little weird ? anyway i like it .. great job i hope next time you call he is in the right zone |
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Re: The call
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:17:08 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed your poem, it is very good, really beautiful... :) |
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