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KILL YOU

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 05:35:17 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

















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Listen up, let's share.
Come sit right over there.
From experience we learn
Many browny points earned.

Don't hate yourself, dear friends.
Hatred will bring quick end.
Oh yes, It'll kill you, kill you.
Suicide robs our presence, not cool.

Use to hate myself
Didn't care about anyone else.
To get thru this life
Gotta let go inner strife.

Each-n-every soul
is importent, don't you know?
So remember Jesus made all.
Luv yourself, his call.




Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-03-08 05:35:17]
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Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 05:46:20 AM AEST
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Good advice, my friend..
Hope you are doing well..
Luv and Hugs
Jenni


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:50:45 AM AEST
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A lovely poem with a beautiful image. Written perfectly, flows smoothly with a deep message. Thanks for sharing.

Take Care
- Becca


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 07:54:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful stated emy, a most prudent and

compassionate peice of writting well done . . .


Dorian Chambers


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:05:53 PM AEST
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oOo I like this! It's some really good advice, and this is an inspiring poem.


~ Marissa


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:18:32 PM AEST
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intersting, you posted this as a suicide poem but I did not see any where you were going to, but yes there is much more then we know going on in our lives so just live and see what happens.

this is true we do need Him to live the life He gave up, but i still do on occasion hate my self and also try and take my life but this thought is what keeps me from going to far, thank you for sharing it with us, made me feel better thank you. God bless.

wolfman


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:16:46 PM AEST
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wolfman must be an idiot, you plainly stated this was for other people. anyway, a decent right overall, i guess it would have meant more to me if i was suicidal.


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:20:27 AM AEST
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Awww..wonderful advice...love and hugs.
venkat


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:27:19 PM AEST
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A beautifully written and welcomed piece of poetry you have given us dearest Emy.
An absolute masterpiece, truly divine.
Thanks for sharing.


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:01:14 PM AEST
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i agree with jenni. good message especially emy. keep it up.


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:55:02 AM AEST
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excellent words of wisdom.

johnny.


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:36:41 AM AEST
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Thank you Emmy for lifting my spirits. Have been feeling as though the world is closing in around me of late. Nothing is going right. The doors keep closing on all we try to achieve. Still awaiting the final outcome to it all. Your poem made me see that not all is lost.
Help is there if we learn to help ourselves and continue to try and not fail. I pray for the door to opened once more.
Reading your words has brought me an inner comfort and strength.
I cannot thank you enough.
I read these words just when I was at my lowest.
Time to brush of those cobwebs and continue to live.

Amazing poem that touched my heart in more ways than you can ever imagine

Thank you for sharing

Love sweetangelukxxx


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:44:14 PM AEST
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Good advice,but to someone mired in deep depression; others thoughts may not mean a thing.
Depression is a deep black hole.
Don'tcha think satan has a hold ?
I have been there and my pleas and others prayers helped me through.
Understanding and love is what we owe.
Sinned


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:47:18 PM AEST
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Good advice,but to someone mired in deep depression; others thoughts may not mean a thing.
Depression is a deep black hole.
Don'tcha think satan has a hold ?
I have been there and my pleas and others prayers helped me through.
Understanding and love is what we owe.
Sinned


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:40:33 AM AEST
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Thanks again for posting. It's nice to read things that show hope,
unlike most of the stuff I post which is just dark and down...
it's wonderful to see God using you.

~Waos/Kara


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:21:12 AM AEST
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ROCKING POEM WITH COOL PICTURES! LOVED IT!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Sensommar on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:16:13 AM AEST
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A deeply touching poem that stays inside my heart Acceptence is the key to many things in life Letting God into your life means that you are never alone again A beautiful poem Wishing you a wonderful day , Pia


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by ebooibo on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:02:03 AM AEST
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wow we kinda of write alot keep doing what you do...


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 01:38:24 PM AEST
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This is really good advice. Thank you for sharing this. It's really help full. I have been thinking about ending my life again, and this has helped. Thanks.

Scott


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by english-pea-pelter on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:43:01 PM AEST
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great, great write... really boasts the confidence of the people who need it. thanks for sharing your endless talent...

XoxO,
english-pea-pelter


Re: KILL YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:19:12 AM AEST
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Great poem and good advice.




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