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real
Contributed by
needs_change
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:36:19 PM in AEST
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tears are falling
my heart is failing
time is standing still
the words you said i won't forget
it was to good to be real
i knew it would happen
my cheeks start to dampen
time won't move
i saw it coming
like a storm that was brewing
i can only think of you
but i'llmove on in time
i told you i was fine
it's not the first time that i've lied
all the times i was lost
trapped in the corner being bossed
your the one that pulled me through
i should have known
when time stood still
i should have known
it was to good to be real
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Re: real
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:32:00 PM AEST
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| awe .. very sad .. and a very good write .. although im not too sure what happened .. but i understand what your trying to say !! good job ! |
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Re: real
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by Naughtygurl on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:06:35 AM AEST
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this is so sad, I'm sorry ... I promise things will get better ... I still love your poems keep writing
~~Britt |
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