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Verses of Blood's Sorrow
Contributed by
essentially9
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:29:13 PM in AEST
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Verses of Blood's Sorrow
You wrought the blood
Of your own followers
And tears produced a flood
For the fallen martyrs
You infect delusions of life
By saying you'll take away strife
When you'll do nothing of the kind
And leave happiness to find
In the verses of hatred that you preach
You leave perfection out of their reach
You have so many people that believe
In your lies about faith needed to see
But my blood is what you've taken enough of
With your sick delusions of love
And I've seen enough
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essentially9
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2005-03-07 21:29:13]
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Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:33:06 PM AEST
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Great post Jen....Hmmm.With religion...I feel the same way....Now with you...I wonder what your talking about...great job again...
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Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:06:12 PM AEST
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I am not sure if you were talking about
religion with this, but if you were it was still a
great poem even though I disagree with it. I
loved the title it was just awesome. Keep up
the great writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow
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by coolreengo on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:51:31 PM AEST
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| wow. really cool. I'm not very religous so, i'm not sure if its meant to be. Like i said, really cool. |
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Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow
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by axeman on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:33:26 AM AEST
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| this is a good poem, and about a topic that i love to write about. keep up the good work. |
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Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:16:51 PM AEST
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| Odd how in this write it seems that you have broken free of this power, leader while so many others have not. Are you wrong or are they? An interesting perspective, well done! |
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