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I'm Sorry.....
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
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The arguements tend to get in the way,
of our love that we share,
like the one we had the other day,
to terrible to bare,
I'm sorry for the things I did,
to make you yell at me,
I can't keep my feelings hid,
I was so angry,
tracing what had happened in my mind,
trying to see what I did wrong,
stupid things is what I find,
thank God our love is strong,
I'm sorry I never meant to hurt you,
or cause you any pain,
for you are my rainbow,
after the pouring rain,
I could never live with out you,
not even for a while,
My love will never be untrue,
because I'll have your smile,
We all sometimes feel regret,
but not till after the fight,
I will always love you don't forget,
So lets not recall the other night,
Things we said in anger & tears,
is not worth the pain,
for what we had through the years,
should in our heart remain,
Jelousy takes the best of us,
It happens to us both,
we need to keep faith in trust,
remember our salome oath!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-12-16 13:40:00]
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Re: I'm Sorry.....
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 04:05:54 PM AEST
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Awww Christina...this is a lovely apologetic write. I can relate... actually, my next post will be one sorta related... Have a happy and holy Christmas season!!!
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Re: I'm Sorry.....
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by spooky on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:16:06 PM AEST
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only if we knew seconds,minutes or even hours that it would be like this,,we would stop or even walk out for some fresh air,,just to stop the arugements that were bound to happen,,,,great stuff,,,,your friend in words
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Re: I'm Sorry.....
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by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:27:03 PM AEST
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Christina you hit this one right on the nail..a person can never go wrong saying they are sorry...this is a beautifully written poem expressing the words I'm sorry....thanks for sharing it...it really grabs a person and gives them alot to think about...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: I'm Sorry.....
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by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:27:04 PM AEST
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Christina you hit this one right on the nail..a person can never go wrong saying they are sorry...this is a beautifully written poem expressing the words I'm sorry....thanks for sharing it...it really grabs a person and gives them alot to think about...
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Re: I'm Sorry.....
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 10:03:13 PM AEST
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Wow. You hit that one with a metal hammer. I like this. It's too bad that we can't learn before the fight, but I guess it's a good thing the fight accomlishes something.
YS |
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Re: I'm Sorry.....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 03:35:14 PM AEST
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| Hey well I thought that this poem was great. To some people it really did hit the spot. But i alsothink that you shouldn't always say your sorry when you do something wrong. after awhile the word sorry will be worn out,cuz you say it everytime you do something wrong and you know that is what they wanna hear.i have poem that is called SORRY and it will be posted by next week sotake some time and read it. If you wanna tell me something about the comment I made e-mail me at Sham2qty@aol.com |
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