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he gave up
Contributed by
karmen
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:37:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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His soul,
now moving on from this world.
Floating away,
from this body, and this life.
Look closely,
this soul tells a story.
Darkend by the pain,
and by the hurt.
He lived a life,
but not a long one.
After so many attempts,
of trying to be understood.
He gave up.
And after so long,
of being tortured by peers.
He stopped it.
He put the blade,
to his throat,
and within one movement.
He was gone.
Now hes slowly drifting away,
in the winters cold breeze.
Copyright ©
karmen
... [
2005-03-07 18:37:03]
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Re: he gave up
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by Rhymingron on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:45:43 PM AEST
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| Oh this makes me sad. I lost someone to suicide. This is a very good poem, though. |
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Re: he gave up
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by hellsfallenangel on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 08:18:32 PM AEST
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sad but good nice write bye
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