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Unfelt Love

Contributed by rugby_player on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:14:41 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

i told you how i felt
I gave you my heart
You told me what we had was true
I beleived you

We talked endlessly through the night
We just laid there
i held you in my arms and shared everything

After all this
I found out that everytime
Everytime you said those words i love you
There was no meaning behind it

You asked me if i was mad at you
I told you no
But how could I not
I thought you loved me
I asked you to marry me

Then i find out you loved him
Why should i live
Whats the point now
I lost my shot at happiness

My heart is left there
Bleeding the blood of love

But i'm not mad at you
I told you before as long as your happy
I will be happy
I just cannot continue to breath
Knowing that your with him
You left me for my own flesh and blood
My brother
So now i leave you with this note of death
Good bye

Copyright © rugby_player ... [ 2005-03-07 17:14:41]
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Re: Unfelt Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 06:34:23 PM AEST
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why tis' you write such sad words. They were good tho...I hope all is well...

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