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Anywhere But Here
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:57:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take me to the place
Take me back to the time
I don't want to be here
Take me there...yes that would be fine
Anywhere but here
Please remove my soul
Scrape it off the floor
Take me away from this desolate hole
I want to leave
Can't you see?
I'm crying out
So desperately
I don't want to die
I don't want to live
Your hand to me
May you give...
Copyright ©
Dying_Angel
... [
2005-03-07 16:57:56]
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Re: Anywhere But Here
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:59:55 PM AEST
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Heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Its well written, very emotional and well expressed. I hope you find what you're looking for soon.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Anywhere But Here
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by Red_October on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:08:11 PM AEST
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| This is good, I know the feelings. Nice write. Tiffany J. |
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Re: Anywhere But Here
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by Rylo on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:23:33 PM AEST
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| Very twisty, I like this one. Excellent writing. |
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