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The Dark Life
Contributed by
Rylo
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:56:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The master refuses to speak
Suddenly the spell is broken
And it's just another deal
One that's all to real
Gently he kisses your eyelids
Just the feeling is enough
It's the feeling of the bloodlust
The master speaks in tongues
As he helps your life come undone
Your alter ego seems to blend into the mist
As the moonlight retreats, into a night of bliss
Yet as he sends me through the valley of doubt
I will not ask for mercy
For I have suddenly become thirsty
He forces me to submit to his will
And shows me the ultimate thrill
He shows me the way
To where darkness likes to play
As there are snakes, and snails, and puppy dog tails
That hang in the trees, of the darkened trails.
This master of mine
Has made my life all so divine.
2005 copyright by: Ronald W. Smith
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2005-03-07 16:56:41]
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Re: The Dark Life
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by Dying_Angel on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:00:37 PM AEST
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| ......(speechless).... |
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Re: The Dark Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:05:48 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Expressive, thought-provoking and just plain beautiful. I love it.
Take Care
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Re: The Dark Life
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by Red_October on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:10:22 PM AEST
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| Wow...interesting topic. Other than the fact that it scares me to death, I like the poem muchly. Again, very interesting...Tiffany J. |
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Re: The Dark Life
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:47:30 PM AEST
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Again dark poetry becomes you.
This is an awsome dark vampire piece.
I love this piece.well done. |
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Re: The Dark Life
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:52:02 PM AEST
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The Dark Life indeed. Thanks to Katy for reminding me you were here ... and thanks to you for writing again with regularity ...
Well written Rylo
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: The Dark Life
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:17:28 PM AEST
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gave me a chill you did good one ROn
Michelle |
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Re: The Dark Life
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:15:32 PM AEST
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A fine peice of writting a tale of horror as told
by a master . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: The Dark Life
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 09:26:06 PM AEST
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| ::subscribes prozac:: sorry, only way to make sure my poetry is better, =] |
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