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ANOTHER DREAM ABOUT YOU
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:41:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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ITS GETTING DARK OUTSIDE
THE QUITENESS IS KIND OF CREEPY
I'M TRYING TO STAY AWAKE
BUT THE TRUTH IS
I'M GETTING PRETTY SLEEPY
I CLOSED MY EYES SO I COULD PRAY TO GOD
BUT HE WASN'T ANSWERING HIS PHONE
SO THIS SEEMED REALLY ODD
I TURNED ON THE RADIO
JUST SO I COULD STAY AWAKE
THE MUSIC WAS FADING
AND MY DREAMS WERE READY TO BE MY FATE
LAYING IN MY BED
I HEARD A KNOCK ON THE DOOR
I THOUGHT
FINALLY I HAVE COMPANY
BUT WHEN I OPENED IT
IT WAS MY BROTHER
WITH A BULLET THROUGH HIS HEAD
LOOKING UP AT ME FROM THE FLOOR
MY DREAM ALREADY HAD STARTED
I ASKED FOR MY SOUL
BUT MY FLESH SAID HE HAD DEPARTED
REUNITED AS ONE
I WALKED TO THIS ROOM
AND IT WAS THERE THAT I SAW
A BLANKET FOLDED NEXT TO A MOP AND A BROOM
I GRABBED ALL THREE AND WENT BACK TO THE DOOR
I PICKED UP MY BROTHER AND PUT HIM ON THE COUCH
COVERED HIM
AND TOLD HIM THAT I'D BE BACK AFTER I CLEANED THE BLOOD OFF THE FLOOR
WHEN I RETURNED
HE WAS NO LONGER THERE
BUT WHEN I TURNED MY HEAD
HE WAS WALKING UP THE STAIRS
AS I GOT CLOSER
HE HAD ALREADY SHUT THE DOOR
WHEN I TURNED THE NOB............
I WOKE UP
LAYING ON THE FLOOR
Copyright ©
THUGGIN4REAL
... [
2005-03-07 15:41:10]
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Re: ANOTHER DREAM ABOUT YOU
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by SourPatchGurl on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:13:38 PM AEST
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| This poem is so sad. I love the detail that you put in it. Keep writing poems. I would like to read more. |
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Re: ANOTHER DREAM ABOUT YOU
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:57:55 PM AEST
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A powerfully moving write. I'm sorry to hear about your brother, and about your dreams. The poem itself is beautiful in a way, written to perfection and flows smoothly. I really hope you find your peace soon.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: ANOTHER DREAM ABOUT YOU
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by Daniels_Princess on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:02:37 PM AEST
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| Its so hard..losing someone so close to you..and you need them there so bad, that you're mind will do anything..just have them there..I can really relate to this..thanks for posting it up..It brought me to tears.. |
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