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The Regretful Suicide Escape
Contributed by
thepos
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:30:11 PM in AEST
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The Regretful Suicide Escape
Please, help me,
I cannot take back my sins.
Please, feel me,
Because no matter how much faith, death wins.
You can say you don't want to die,
But that will never come true.
You will have to die someday,
And you will never ever renew.
I can't ask for forgiveness,
Because there's nothing to forgive.
I've realized that I can't change my past,
But I wish I could relive.
Bleeding tears of denile,
Hate causes too much stress.
Oh, god I would pray to you,
But you cause me so much distress.
I need help from someone,
I don't care how it's done.
As long as I can be happy,
And separate my head from this gun.
I only wish there was some way,
That I can escape all this life.
Any other way,
So I can put down this knife.
I want to be happy,
I want to feel alive.
Why does it hurt,
To not know when death will arrive?
Stop me from these feelings,
These feelings of suicide.
Why must every prayer I make,
Always get denied.
I just can't run away,
I've tried it all before.
It ended in disaster,
And in love I won't adore.
Please, please,
Somebody in this world help me!
I can't run away,
And I don't want to bleed.
--Evan L.--
more of my poetry at http://thepoemsofsorrow.com
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Re: The Regretful Suicide Escape
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:45:00 PM AEST
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| THAT WAS TIGHT. I DONT KNOW IF THAT POEM HAS ANY TRUTH TO YOU, BUT I DO KNOW IT WAS WELL DONE. |
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Re: The Regretful Suicide Escape
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by wolfman on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:48:15 PM AEST
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youy ask for help then shoot them down with reasons they wont work, you cry as you try to take your life that meens that you dont want to, your just taking the quick solution to the problems and pain you are faced with. yes life can be very difficult some times but things will get better, all your doing is making it harder on your self when you do these things they cause you to think why should I bother liuving you get upset about that then that makes you more upset, its just a never ending circal of pain and despair that only ends when you give up and actualy accept the help that is there.
Sorry that my words seemd harsh, but I to have felt this way before. I have been to the edge and back (never past it) so I know whats there to do only two things one: cross over, which will take you and you can almost never come back, Two: or you can just let life happen and try and start anew, it is hard and will probaly be the most chalinging thingh you will ever have to do but in the end its worth it, trust me, just know that we are all here if you need help, just ask we do care about you. all-in-all this was a good poem it portrayes the images that are there at the end of your rope, I am looking forword to reading more for you, tell then. be strong and God bless.
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Re: The Regretful Suicide Escape
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:10:09 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Its beautiful and sad at the same time, moving even. I hope things perk up for you soon. Well written and flows brilliantly, thanks for sharing.
Take care
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Re: The Regretful Suicide Escape
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by blueyes11 on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 11:26:34 PM AEST
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This was powerful.
And i feel the need to comment, not just on the poem itself, but on your apparent state of mind. As wolfman said before, in slightly different words, it is clear that you are crying out for help, and clearly don;t want to take your life. Though right now things may seem so incredibly hopeless, just think of the beacon of hope you could be to others when the meticulous wheel of time has made a few revolutions and you have begun to heal. Here's an experiment, and at first, i'm pretty sure you wont like the idea, but give it a chance. Try focusing your energy outward, considering the ways you can reach out and help others. Doing so really helps yourself.
And finally, know that God loves you more than you can even fathom. More than any friends, family, boyfriend/girlfriend ever vould. Ever. That's huge. He does answer prayers, just not always the way you would like or expect. and he DOES forgive. So don';t give up hope. You Father is the God of all comfort, and he loves you! |
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