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Contributed by
Red_October
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:01:52 PM in AEST
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emotional waves are like rain
and random
sometimes for no reason at all
i think
deadly today the tears fall
so hard they hit the ground
so many i could never count
and that dust never settles in my house
i get confused, walking
random with nothing to do
I am like a prisoner
when i escape into the night
i go crazy from a lack of sleep
i don't know if i'll ever be right
and things happen, i don't know why
it's like karma
raining from the sky
and it's emotional, like rain
it's the same day, replayed
all over again
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Re: random
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:20:34 PM AEST
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Re: random
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:39:23 AM AEST
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Your image of imprisonment was especially good there. I like this one, Tiffany J.
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Re: random
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 09:59:03 AM AEST
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The wilderness is a dry and angry place. I have wandered there and wandered back occasionally.
Remembering what this feels like. You have described it well as always.
Stitch
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