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When You Cry
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 12:33:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you cry my love I’ll be there,
I’ll let you in my arms tell you I care,
I will wipe away your falling tears,
My love for you will always be near.
I hate to see the tears flow,
They fall from your beautiful eyes so slow,
It hurts me to see the man I love upset,
It’s something that my heart won’t ever forget.
I will dry your soft brown eyes,
How I hate to hear your sobs & cries,
It will stay forever inside my soul,
Over my heart the pain will roll.
I am here my love don’t you cry,
Never to you will I say my goodbye,
Forever I am yours as you are mine,
Through all the tears our love will shine.
I am not just your lover, but your best friend,
I will stay with you right until the end,
Holding your hand & wiping tears as they fall,
Always & forever my heart will answer your call.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-03-07 12:33:39]
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Re: When You Cry
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 12:36:06 PM AEST
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Awww pixie i am sure he knows how you feel and how you care for him.
Awsome write. |
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Re: When You Cry
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by Willofree on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 12:44:39 PM AEST
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Very tender romantic and loving write. Good rhyme and rhythum, I especially like t he lasl stanza....
Good work
Willofree |
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Re: When You Cry
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by Nobrainer on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 12:53:43 PM AEST
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aww...such a sweet poem, very romantic and loving, i really enjoyed it.
~ Jess |
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Re: When You Cry
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:07:04 PM AEST
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A beauitiful love poem touching and sweet
and warms the heart o f the reader . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: When You Cry
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:16:24 PM AEST
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| Pix this was such a lovely write. Very much from the heart. Peace to you my friend. |
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