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Hualapais
Contributed by
putteragain
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 11:21:06 AM in AEST
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A winter haven
snow falling into the night
my child laughing out
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2005-03-07 11:21:06]
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Re: Hualapais
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:02:00 PM AEST
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Great Haiku, Putter...Good imagery!
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Re: Hualapais
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 03:38:12 PM AEST
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haiku is very underrated, and i very much like this one... its amazing how much feeling and mood can be packing into those 17 syllabals. the peace, the beauty of nature, and the thrill of YOUR child.. laughing. very personal, and powerful.. nice piece!
shalom,
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Re: Hualapais
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 03:38:30 PM AEST
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haiku is very underrated, and i very much like this one... its amazing how much feeling and mood can be packed into those 17 syllabals. the peace, the beauty of nature, and the thrill of YOUR child.. laughing. very personal, and powerful.. nice piece!
shalom,
joshua |
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Re: Hualapais
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 03:32:12 PM AEST
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| This is a really nice haiku. |
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