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Frost Bite
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:22:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Coldness creeps
Seeking refuge
Setting itself
Deep inside your soul
Your body no longer useful
Cannot move an inch
Your heart no longer with you
You cannot feel a thing
Love slinks away
As anger replaces
Happiness goes astray
Your body ices
Copyright ©
EverlastingDawn
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2005-03-07 09:22:05]
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Re: Frost Bite
(User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:34:25 AM AEST
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| You show much emotion in your poem. I have aways believed that love is just around the corner. It is just a matter of finding the right one. I wish you lots of luck from bernard. |
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Re: Frost Bite
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:47:15 AM AEST
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It's dark yet it has life of its own, i really enjoyed it. Well written too.
Jane x |
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