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i walk upon
Contributed by
electrique_poet
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 01:38:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i walk upon
blurred vision
that immitates
her glasses
and a hows it going)
well its going good, but
could you hold on just a minute
so i can leave and never look back;
my biggest mistake on constant rerun)
focus=attention
and i have none alotted for you in this moment
and while my intentions are always good
they are a .45 (ex)caliber rifle that
only i seem to pull from the stone to
blow you away with)
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Re: i walk upon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:21:56 PM AEST
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| very original. i liked this one a lot. especially the ending. but then...im demented that way. =] |
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Re: i walk upon
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:02:35 PM AEST
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| Very different in a good way. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. |
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