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Dream
Contributed by
Mystic_Beauty_nz
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Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:16:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A brighter day is coming your way
Look out your window it's time to play
Say goodbye to yesterday
It doesn't belong there's no need to stay
Unbind the ribbons that keep it so bound
Look straight ahead there's more to be found
Let the rhythm of life beat out your song
Guide you and lead you to where you belong
Those dreams that you had, they will come true
Do what is right, what is good for you
Believe in your dreams it's well worth your while
They'll help you achieve your very own style
The you you see when you close your eyes
Or see in the dawn as the sun fill the skies
Past dreams have happened you know they are real
Dreams are now memories and it's real what you feel
Something you've aimed for, something in sight
A dream that you treasure, a gift, a birthright
Keep in your mind that you do have a chance
To do what you love and grow and advance
Copyright ©
Mystic_Beauty_nz
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2005-03-06 23:16:39]
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Re: Dream
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 12:13:15 AM AEST
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beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Dream
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:49:49 AM AEST
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| This is such a beautiful write. I loved the flow to it and I throughly enjoyed reading it. Well written. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Dream
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by Mangs on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:27:31 AM AEST
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| Awesome....wonderful write |
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Re: Dream
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:42:52 AM AEST
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| The poem is so beautiful and insperational. While other poems that are based on topics like this tend to be slightly sappy, this one does not. The flow of the poem is nice, and easy to read. The rhyming is a nice touch, making things seem a bit more airy, inhancing the feel of the poem. Great Write. |
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