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Live Life Today
Contributed by
wetnwild
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Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 10:51:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Live your life
As if you might die,
Always say hello,
Never say good-bye
Yesterday is gone
Tomorow is near
Live life today
For today is here
Avoid heart shattering pain
Because that is the worst,
Welcome Love as an adventure
So your soal wont burst
Live life today
For there may be no tomorow,
Enjoy laughter and happiness
Don't dwell on the sorrow
Copyright ©
wetnwild
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2005-03-06 22:51:59]
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Re: Live Life Today
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by Mystic_Beauty_nz on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:08:53 PM AEST
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| so many people need to understand what you wrote.... the importance of love.... well done |
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Re: Live Life Today
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:16:00 AM AEST
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| Absolutely amazing! The poem is short but sweet. The emotions are portrayed nicely. The meaning is clearly shown, but in a creative and beautiful way. The rhyming is great, gives the poem an extra element, making the peice even better. The flow of the poem is good, which makes the poem easier to read and understand. It's unbelievable how strong this poem is, considering it's a bit shorter than what you tend to find. But this poem is great. Fantastic Write. |
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Re: Live Life Today
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by sride686 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:38:21 AM AEST
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| A very well done write and if more people lived their life by your words then the world would be a much happier place. Thank you for sharing this great work of art now if only I can live by these words. Take care and I’m glad I read this write and I look forward to more….Steve |
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