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Ashley`
Contributed by
jjones12
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 10:46:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Your voice is like a huming bird,
beautiful and sweet,
your talents,
are as great as mine,
your faith is so very strong,
the strongest i've ever seen,
i want you to know you have very many blessings,
you are one in a kind,
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2005-03-06 22:46:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ashley`
(User Rating: 1 ) by xtremcalibur on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 10:54:07 PM AEST (User
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Why don't you do a remake and this time give it some thought. This write has potential and I liked it a lot. I believe this is either a friend or a girlfriend. It deserves more thought to bring your feelings across. This is not an attack, because I do like it a lot. Just an opinion. Thanks for sharing. |
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