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ignored
Contributed by
bruised_angel
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Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:11:49 PM in AEST
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how could he ignore me
i who spent the night with him
i who was taken in by his words
why did i let down my guard
allowin the preditor get his prey
allowin myself to become broken
prentence love has trapped me
i believe his lies of love
allowing myself to love and betrayed
and now all i was isnt no more
i look to him for love
only to be ignored
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Re: ignored
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:25:00 PM AEST
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a angry but very sad and emotional poem, can feel your hurt through your write, sorry for your pain,
pix xx |
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Re: ignored
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by Laurielaurie on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:46:24 PM AEST
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| Spelling needs to improve, but I liked it. |
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Re: ignored
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by Compton-tre-block on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:54:57 PM AEST
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forget that dude..
girl you find someone better
than him...men are animals
u need a real nigga |
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Re: ignored
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:04:31 PM AEST
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Very well written but so sad and emotional. I felt your pain and hurt and anger and sadness. keep writing..
blessed be
christina |
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