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The Last Thing I Saw

Contributed by thepos on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:24:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You can say you are sorry,
But it means nothing to me.
I felt pain and you laughed,
Now it's time for you to see.
You think I'll be your friend?
What a pointless joke.
You made me bleed inside,
And my emotions choke.
I know you have no mercy,
Well niether do I!
I'm much more crazy,
Now you'll have to die!
I'm hiding in your closet,
I see you kiss your wife.
Maybe I'll kill her first,
Make her come one with this knife.
You lay down on the bed,
Your wife is taking a bath.
I jump out the closet,
Now you'll feel my wrath!
You jump out of bed,
You fell to the floor.
I only smiled,
As your flesh tore.
You pushed me off your chest,
You reached under your bed.
Oh, I'm now so happy,
Soon you will be dead.
I swing the knife towards your face,
You pulled out a gun.
You shot me in the chest,
Now my life is done.
You stood up bleeding,
I looked you in the eye.
Your wife ran out the bathroom,
She then started to cry.
I looked at her and smiled,
I swung the knife once more,
4 shots to the chest,
I fell hard on the floor.
The last thing I saw,
Before I lost my life.
Was your red blood,
Driping from the knife.

--Evan L.--

more of my poetry at http://thepoemsofsorrow.com

Copyright © thepos ... [ 2005-03-06 12:24:04]
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Re: The Last Thing I Saw (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:42:34 PM AEST
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whoa !! i like your style of writing .. very dark and oh i dont know .. lol but i am a fan anyway !! keep writing !

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