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Broken Glass
Contributed by
russ-dawg
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Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:34:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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All these feelings locked in me
i'm alive but as dead as dead can be
this can't be right some one help please
my loudest noise is a silent scream
wash out the blood and let me come clean
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Re: Broken Glass
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:37:30 AM AEST
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| I like it. Good job. |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by bttrflynajar on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:38:08 AM AEST
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| this is so great, its short to the point, yet it flows wonderfully. nice job!! |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by xtremcalibur on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:42:24 AM AEST
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| Extremely touching as it were meant to be. Less is best, therefore, nothing got lost in your quest for understanding. Good write. |
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