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To You
Contributed by
Keeraku
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:02:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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~~ >>------- To You -----> ~~
The darkness inside isn't getting any brighter
The load on my shoulders isn't getting any lighter
Just when I think that it's going to shine
A dark cloud forms over head and rains on this hope of mine
I cannot and will not take this pain anymore
Because it is eating me away straight to the core
It's on my last nerve should I sever it now?
You say it will be ok but I ask you how?
I do not see this end of the road of pain carriers
All I see is a road block with barriers
How am I supposed to get by this?
When it seems like just yesterday you said goodbye with a kiss?
I will never understand the pain you gave me so hurtful indeed
Or how our love could go so far yet only seem to travel ten feet
So to you I ask this simple question once more
Why must we go on..for it was YOU that shut the door
So now I am done with you cause of the wrong way you are stearing
And wonder what in this life you are truly fearing
Because no one on this earth is as crazy as you
Although I'm gettin pretty close to tell ya the truth
So in closing with words to you that bring much thought
Just sit back and think of how much pain you really brought
Copyright ©
Keeraku
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2005-03-06 00:02:52]
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Re: To You
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by breny on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:10:24 AM AEST
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this is really good. I hate how most relationships have to end by someone getting hurt.
Well i hope u have moved on.
Good write! |
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Re: To You
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:24:26 PM AEST
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| amazing ...the way uve expressed pain...hope the worst is over |
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