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Wonderland
Contributed by
ForeverAndADay
on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 07:34:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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In the depths of her dreamland below the cobwebs...
Sheets of glass...
Below the locked door with the missing key...
She here's a voice saying.
"Wake Up"
In this place the white rabbit has lost his engagement...
Has turned up missing...
Will never be found...
She is in the shadows...
deep in the cracks of reality...
Wasting away in Wonderland.
Nobody can reach her...
Her ship has been stranded...
Broken up on some Iceburg...
Just south of nowhere...
She's lying in water...
Right up to her eyeballs...
No one around here...
All her saviors have left her.
For some other place farther away from this madness.
She is bound by this spider web...
Where she is woven in a prison that threatens to take..
All that she knows...
And all that comes useful...
So that she will either be replaced by some shadow, some strange warped shape of herself...
Or she will fade,
Some broken toy that will stray from the shelf...
Gathering dust from some strange world where the memory of other people who have been stranded there are found.
As the real world fades...
Being taken completely by this twisted fantasy land...
The words of some familiar stanger become hard to hear...
And she's left in darkness and stillness...
No light can break through into here...
This place of which runs on madness...
And the straying thoughts of those who get lost here...
She's bathed in nothingness.
(Another Child Lost In WoNdErLaNd)
DNB
(The heart monitor breaks down.)
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Re: Wonderland
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoetBaby814 on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 07:43:37 PM AEST (User
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Wow that is really good. I loved it it was very deep. |
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Re: Wonderland
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:22:09 AM AEST (User
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wow, that was amazing.,... well done!!! i cant beleive others havnt commented besdies one... well done!!! |
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Re: Wonderland
(User Rating: 1 ) by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 06:59:41 PM AEST (User
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Deep. Sadly... this is true. Many children go lost and are never found because by the time they are adults it won't matter... they are too far gone. Great write...
Jodi |
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