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Queen of hearts

Contributed by hakai on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:32:45 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



When she became she made her thrown her castle and every thing out of parts and broking bones of all the men that she had known that she had sucked dry she sits back to relaxes with eternal youth in her hand she holds a goblet tainted red with blood of all the men her collection at least the heart that’s all she needs to keep looking younger every year she looks the same or more radiant and beautiful then ever or so they all say as her “supply” of men start getting lower she looks a little older she hates what she sees so she demands another order after all what kind of guy could deny a beautiful girl of her status but she has grown a rep of being with so many men and most of them have never been seen of after but there’s still some perverts and players that try to tam her but they just end up like the others now the men are low and know one likes a hoe she has grown dispirit and will any anything to survive so she tears up her maids and devours there heart but it didn’t have the same affect in one last attempt she ripped out her heart and she tried to eat it when the cops went in they found her dead so they left here to rest they blockade her place and no one has been there scenes




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Re: Queen of hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:27:21 PM AEST
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very nice...i like how you turned the 'queen of hearts' (form alice and wonderland) concept into a entirely different thing...wonderful idea...love how it went, the whole plot is great...

Auryn


Re: Queen of hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Ataraxia on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:23:29 PM AEST
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Aah this just looks like one extremely long sentence. It would be easier to read if you made lines or at least put periods in there.




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