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The looking glass

Contributed by hakai on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:28:41 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

The looking glass lays shattered on the floor to scared to pick it up more afraid to look into it I sit here alone as my sanity thinness the world false to chaos and I fill like its my fault I cannot believe that it got so deep I camp out in this dark damp scary place I now call my home it has never seen the light of day the pills keep my foes away but I don't fill any bigger I don't make a sound cuz there all out to get me the queen and her goons are all out to find me it is ****** when the one you rely on disappears in a second and your closest friend is your enemy and there's no one to believe in have had enough of living in the shadows it is time to put away the fear and find away out of here so I pick myself up off the cold wooden floor that creeks and squeaks as I stumble across the room under the light of a full moon as I look into the looking glass now I can see that it was not broken it was me that was ruined my soul was shattered with my sanity the looking glass completed what I was missing as it vanishes I can see that the world is no longer corrupted and my clothes no longer tainted did this just really happen or is it in my head or is the hole just getting deeper tricking me into false security I will no longer be tricked I will not falter I will not longer be afraid of stuff with out an answer now I could see clearly but ill get my revenge to all of thous who killed me deep inside me and made me fill like I was dead and the self inflected scars all around my wrist be afraid of my wrath for this psycho ***** will be all over you ***

Copyright © hakai ... [ 2005-03-05 17:28:41]
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Re: The looking glass (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:13:26 PM AEST
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'it has never seen the light of day,
the pills keep my foes away'

it was me that was ruined,
my soul was shattered with my sanity;

nice job..a lil disorganized, but i still like it...
some people may be confuzzled by it, but it
made sense to me...like the way you wrote it, very nice...

Auryn

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