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Note of Apology
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:45:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Just called to say hi
Nothing big
How are things?
You ok?
Not spoken in a while
Do you wanna come out?
Maybe for a walk?
Or dinner?
I know I've been horrible
Cruel,vicious.
But really I'm sorry
I didn't mean for you to get hurt
It just slipped out...
I've liked you for a long time
Ok...I've loved you for ever...
I didn't want to tell you this way...
When I saw you with him...
I was wrong I know...
I'm so sorry!
I love you, I LOVE YOU!
I love you...
~
A note left on my friends gravestone from her best friend Steven...
Copyright ©
Dying_Angel
... [
2005-03-05 14:45:42]
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Re: Note of Apology
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by Rhymingron on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:49:51 PM AEST
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| Oh, how this hurts. A very good write. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Note of Apology
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by xtremcalibur on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:50:31 PM AEST
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| Chilling. I felt the pain. It is important to identify and feel something when reading a poem like yours. One must read it twice to feel the whole impact of the prose. Powerful and to the point. |
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Re: Note of Apology
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by BrokenAngel on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:00:17 PM AEST
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This is so sad. It made me realize to let everyone know how you feel you never know when it could be too late.
~BrokenAngel~ |
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