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Falling to Pieces
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:55:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Don't you see
What you're doing to me?
I'm falling apart at the seams
I just can't seem
To forget you
I'm dying inside
I'm losing my mind
I can't forget those words
You yelled at me
"Go away! I don't want to see youi face anymore!"
Every night I cry
Every day I ask why
I'm falling to pieces
Without you
You were hurtful
I couldn't see straight
I walked through my weeks in a daze
My mind stuck in a haze
I can't forget you, no matter how many days
I'm falling over the edge
I'm on the brink
Only you can save me
I can't even think
I go through my day with a smile
I can fool everyone only for a while
Please don't leave me
I'm falling to pieces
You are gone
And I can't stop it
Just like I can't stop from falling over the ledge
I'm loosing control
Can't keep my mask on forever
Please come back to me
I'm dying
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Re: Falling to Pieces
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by xtremcalibur on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:54:17 PM AEST
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| Extremely powerful and with loads of pain. A heartfelt write. Thank you for sharing, it releases some of the demons working within. |
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Re: Falling to Pieces
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by BrokenAngel on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 04:53:01 PM AEST
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| I can totally relate to this poem. I hope everything gets better for you and you can finally forget its taking me awhile hopefully it will be faster for you. |
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