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Life
Contributed by
purplestary
on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:39:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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stars twinkle brightly
as they watch over you
they're way of telling us
that we can start anew
love can be found
just open your eyes
and beauty is present
in the loudest cries
pain is just passion
thats wearing a mask
life is confusing
with questions to ask
dreams get knocked down
while hope is forgotten
along many roads
hearts will be broken
chemicals are numbing
they never can cure
sometimes a hug
will turn a heart pure
Copyright ©
purplestary
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2005-03-05 13:39:28]
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Re: Life
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by Rhymingron on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:18:57 PM AEST
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| A good poem. I liked what you said and the way you said it. |
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Re: Life
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by xtremcalibur on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 03:56:27 PM AEST
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| From my perspective, I see what you are saying. At a point, it was a bit confusing, but I recaptured what you were getting at. Good write. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Life
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by nabokovfan87 on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:23:57 PM AEST
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| um good job liked it just felt like i wanted to read more at the end see if u can add more. later.... |
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 06:45:33 PM AEST
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| This is beautifully written! This poem made me smile. Great work. :-) |
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Re: Life
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by nogusto435 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:20:15 PM AEST
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| very good. it couldn't have been written better. |
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 06:51:19 AM AEST
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The hardest thing i had to do today was to
keep my self from commenting on this litte masterpeice untill i read the whole poem, i
mean i read the first verse and almost broke down crying and simply wanted to comment
on it. what directness not to mention feeling
your words conveyed in this poemwhen i go to your page i'm like a little kid in toy store
looking up and down the list and trying to choose which poem i'll read next. As for the title, amazing how the word LIFE . . . can be
so compelling and irrizistable to wanna read about an exlcellent writter by a true artist who's worth every bit of the praise that she get's . . .
Ben
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