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A Long Way To Go
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:49:43 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I have a very long way to go,
It won’t be easy that I know,
I worry that to the end I’ll never make,
Before I get there maybe I’ll break.
Will you hold my hand all the way?
Bring the sunshine into my day,
Comfort me when my tears fall,
Answer the phone whenever I call.
The road is long & it is dusty,
I hope my strength does not go rusty,
I’ve lay awake night after night,
Wondering if I will ever win this fight.
It seems that every time I get back up,
Depression comes over & kicks me in the butt,
It makes me stronger each time I rise again,
But still my heart isn’t immune to the pain.
I wish it was then I wouldn’t hurt,
But I’d not feel love heart would lay in the dirt,
My feet hurt as my journey is long,
One day I’ll be happy right where I belong.
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pixie
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2005-03-05 08:49:43]
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Re: A Long Way To Go
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:59:58 AM AEST
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An incredibly stunning write, full of inspiration and emotion. I love it... I hope you do have a very long journey, but I also hope the paths learns to stay smooth along the way. Keep your chin up always.
Take care
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Re: A Long Way To Go
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:06:47 AM AEST
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What a stunning write about a feeling i know only to well.
This is simply outstanding Krissie, keep your chin up cause I know there will be someone who will always hold your hard thru your hardships.
Hugs,
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Re: A Long Way To Go
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:17:04 AM AEST
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There may be a long way to go, is it never easy to stay on the right path sometimes.
You are on the path though, so never give up following it
Steve |
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Re: A Long Way To Go
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by bernard on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:25:24 AM AEST
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| Keep in there Pixie. I am nearly at the end of the road but I think that I can say I have enjoyed every minute of my life in spite of many adversaries. Keep smiling love from bernard. |
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Re: A Long Way To Go
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 11:22:28 AM AEST
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my guess is u already made it beautiful poem pix, love your style. . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: A Long Way To Go
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:01:12 AM AEST
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this was beautiful Kris. You are strong
though and I KNOW you can beat depression.
I loved it all wow I don;t know what else to say.
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