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Rid Myself Of You...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:25:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why can't you see life
through my eyes
The pain and aches
that I feel inside
I always made sacrifices
for you
Tarnished I want to feel
love anew
You're selfish, inconsiderate and
so unkind
I can't believe how I was so blind
Tears fill my eyes everyday
Just like the moon and its umbrae
Sadness dwells in the chambers of
my heart
Leaving me feeling unloved and
thwart
I thought that when I'd fall in love
I'd feel what angels have up above
Far from the truth I lay stranded
In a relationship always been commanded
I can no longer take this anguish
To think you loved me
Would only prove me foolish
One last thing I vow to do
Is to finally rid myself of you....
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mina-1
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2005-03-05 05:25:51]
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Re: Rid Myself Of You...
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:19:45 AM AEST
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I hope there is one thing you never try to rid yourself of..........the ability to put down into words what you feel
Well done
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Re: Rid Myself Of You...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:33:48 AM AEST
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A beautifully heart-wrenching write. I do hope you find someone soon... someone who would do anything to give you the world. Keep your chin up.
Take care
- Becca |
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Re: Rid Myself Of You...
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 11:26:32 AM AEST
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beautifuly expressed wissh u well . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Rid Myself Of You...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:21:59 PM AEST
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| Great write. I can relate. You don't need that person anyway...You deserve better. |
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Re: Rid Myself Of You...
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 06:26:05 PM AEST
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| well written |
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Re: Rid Myself Of You...
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 11:20:54 PM AEST
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| Right on sister! Stay strong. Much peace. |
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Re: Rid Myself Of You...
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by Kachina on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 08:11:34 PM AEST
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| First of all, I would like to thank you for commenting on my poetry. You're is Great! And I totally understand exactly what you wrote. This is a magnificent piece. Keep up the good work. |
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