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> nothingism <
Contributed by
poeteeza
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Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:05:24 AM in AEST
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It's the noise of a thousand nothings-
The smile of a hundred cries..
It's the morning mist that fogs my breath-
That becomes a sweltering night...
It's the quiet I yell to shut up-
And the screams that seem serene...
It's the lipgloss I put on to look "presentable"
Only to wipe off, knowing there was no need...
It's the plastic I wish to shatter-
And this Hunger of mal-nutrition...
It's the RIGHT hand that holds you within arm's reach-
While the LEFT keeps you at arm's distance....
It's the empty picture frames you keep-
And all the undeveloped film in my drawer...
It's the voice that I love to hear-
And the pain that I live for...
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poeteeza
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2005-03-05 01:05:24]
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Re: > nothingism <
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:13:21 AM AEST
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| Wow!! This is absolutely amazing! Seriously, this is amazing! The title really caught my eye, so I thought I'd read, and I'm so glad I did. There's so much to this poem....I love it. Your really have talent. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading. :-) |
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Re: > nothingism <
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by poeteeza on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:22:09 AM AEST
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That is very nice.
=o)
Thank you !!
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Re: > nothingism <
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by Dreama on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:32:56 AM AEST
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im with the others here, this is a really good poem!
I like the style and content! keep writing :)
Pete |
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Re: > nothingism <
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:49:54 AM AEST
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Now this I understand!
I've not read any of your work before, but I'm really taken aback by an uncanning similarity that I see between this and what I posted 'round about the same time (and, for the record, it's extremely unusual of me to sort of point someone I don't know to my own work - but yeh -- it's uncanny). Though, to some - the similarity may not be obvious.
This is a terrific write. Lines like "And screams that seem serene" have enormous impact on this reader. I'm so very glad I happened upon this.
And... welcome to YPDC, poeteeza! I'll be on the lookout for more from you!
Keep writing,
SNM |
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Re: > nothingism <
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:05:15 PM AEST
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wow I loved how this flowed just so deep and
well said. I loved the bluntness of this poem
since often that is what needs to be done
when pain is haunting us. This was a brilliant
write and I LOVED the title.
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