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Best friends forever no matter what happends!
Contributed by
jjones12
on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 11:47:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I hate goodbye's,
goodbyes are the worst,
i feal like i'm going to cry i swear it's a curse,
you've been there for me every day scince i was five,
i remember the first time we met,
i said this is where you can set,
you told me you were from Utah,
i told you that i had just moved here from jeruselum,
at leased you told the truth,
but hey we were only five,
but now your dad lost his job,
and you have to move back to Utah,
i want you to know i will miss you the most,
and i'll be waiting for you to come visit me on this boring coast,
i want you to know,
i won't be like a crow,
black on the outside,
and blue on the inside,
i'll be happy and spunky,
i'll be very funky,
and i will call you every day,
sitin here on this cold ugly day bay!
Copyright ©
jjones12
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2005-03-04 23:47:34]
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Re: Best friends forever no matter what happends!
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by Dreama on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 12:20:06 AM AEST
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Nice job, even with the interesting spelling =)
it's just one of those things, people move apart and the long distance relationship begins.
good luck in keeping it up! peace, P |
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Re: Best friends forever no matter what happends!
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:41:48 AM AEST
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I can totally relate, I'm leaving friends I've known for my whole life (literally, one I had my first bath with in the hospital on the day I was born, lol...). Awesome poem, it really conveys emotion! Great job!
*~Erin~* |
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