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Gone
Contributed by
Merry
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 09:28:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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An empty space between the pages
As if missing a piece of the plot
Edges purposely torn and frayed
I wondered where the page had gone
Missing
Blowing in the wind over Chicago
Whipped up in the clouds over New York
Missing
The emptiness annoyed me
As if I was betrayed somehow
In the telling and retelling of the story
Missing
Lonely for the sound of words
I tried to remember what they said
There was nothing there but silence
As if that world was dead
Copyright ©
Merry
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2005-03-04 21:28:22]
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Re: Gone
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 11:18:54 PM AEST
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Re: Gone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:02:04 AM AEST
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An incredibly beautiful write. I think my favourtie lines would have to be:
"There was nothing there but silence
As if that world was dead"
A deep, creative and insightful piece of writing. A masterpiece even. Thanks for sharing.
Take care
Hugs 'n Love
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Re: Gone
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 04:05:49 PM AEST
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Goodness! You have said this so much better than I ever could.
Stitch |
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Re: Gone
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 01:32:26 PM AEST
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this is brilliant gaille, i feel like one of my pages blew away..... i hope all is well with you sis, miss you... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Gone
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by b_rand on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:29:49 PM AEST
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| interesting how you used the word "Missing" to fill in several lines. good idea |
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